tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8027344311849473966.post934377042753749391..comments2023-07-08T09:11:24.527+01:00Comments on Katy Fosdike: Cinematic Spaces Film Reviews: Voyage To The Moon Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03148870912231307112noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8027344311849473966.post-67919044415852381272012-10-01T12:15:37.713+01:002012-10-01T12:15:37.713+01:00Your first review done! Its always daunting, but y...Your first review done! Its always daunting, but you've done a great job. The one thing I would say is try to incorporate the quotes into the main text. I hope that makes sense :)Anitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00817081012442428728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8027344311849473966.post-29442158083580386722012-09-30T15:26:49.465+01:002012-09-30T15:26:49.465+01:00so - a few technical observations then: your Harva...so - a few technical observations then: your Harvard method is not quite right; the citation that comes after the quote should look like this (Surname, publishing date) - as in (Hall, 2009). Also, when you mention a book or film or play or whatever in the body of your text, you should always seek to give the release/publishing date - so the publishing date for H. G. Wells' The First Men in The Moon, for example. You only need to do this the first time you include them - after that, the title is just fine.tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8027344311849473966.post-63520373133389243052012-09-30T14:14:08.193+01:002012-09-30T14:14:08.193+01:00Well done Katy - great review! Looking forward to ...Well done Katy - great review! Looking forward to what you have to say about Metropolis this week!!Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8027344311849473966.post-84281351276571049482012-09-29T13:53:29.870+01:002012-09-29T13:53:29.870+01:00Katy! A great big shiny gold star for you! Your d...Katy! A great big shiny gold star for you! Your debut review - and it's a good one: it's evidence-based, avoids the first person and satisfies the stipulations of the brief. This must have taken you a while - getting your head around a) the academic conventions, b) the tone, and c) getting all that published via blogger - the effort was worth it (and it will get quicker as your confidence and experience grows) - well done! :)tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com