What's positive about this review is the way in which you seek to use the film's socio-political context to shed light on its possible nexus of meanings and interpretations; what you need to watch however, is your formal tone and academic 'voice' - for example, see below - 'floating around' is too informal and fluffy for this writing context - just keep an eye on your style, which needs to be more precise and less conversational.
Around the time that The Birds was released,there was a lot of political issues *floating around in the news*
What's positive about this review is the way in which you seek to use the film's socio-political context to shed light on its possible nexus of meanings and interpretations; what you need to watch however, is your formal tone and academic 'voice' - for example, see below - 'floating around' is too informal and fluffy for this writing context - just keep an eye on your style, which needs to be more precise and less conversational.
ReplyDeleteAround the time that The Birds was released,there was a lot of political issues *floating around in the news*